Discussion Board Post:

• LRA Outline Peer Review I sent:

– Hi Habibatou, The outline should include information on each section of the lab reports and their structures based on a criteria and your essay should include how it met those criterias. i would reccomend making an outlined based on the lab report checklist the professor attached under the lab report analysis content 

• LRA Peer Reviews I received on my LRA outline:

– The outline does not follow the instructions for the LRA essay. You should focus more on lab reports’ rhetoric or writings rather than the content. How they are written and why one lab report is better than the other? What do they include and exclude in the lab reports that you believe was important? I think your outline currently contains more content than a comparison and critique of the lab report itself. Hope this helps!

-I think you started off great with lab report one that is the kind of information that you need throughout the paper no actual content is needed.Title & Abstract: what are some things that are different in first glance between the three going based on format. How is it constructed. look at the subsecctions do they have anything, do you think thats helping or hurting the sectionUse broader language and speak more about the section as a whole what makes a good tite and abstract or how would you organize the content for it to make sence and then follow that for the rest of the paper. Your method is also really good use more language like that throughout your paper