Discussion Board Post:

• Technical Description Outline Peer review I sent:

-hello jim, i liked how your technical analysis outline on your rice cooker includes lots of important details such as material of each part and its function. helpful to take note of and include in my own descriptions.

-hello zachary, very detailed outline that can be followed to help with your final draft.

• Technical Description Outline Peer review I received:

-Hey Fatima, great outline. However, I think you should maybe add a brief description of each part and how they correspond. You should also add a little description of each image to let readers know what they’re looking at and add a title like ‘Figure 1, figure 2, etc.’ to make it easier when referring back to it.